Monday, 7 May 2012

WIP Wednesday - 8th May

Today I welcome back to the blog, Charlotte Betts, Author of The Apothecary's Daughter. An amazing novel that I reviewed last month.



Photo courtesy of the author

Many thanks for joining me today, Charlotte to talk about your latest WIP.
I am looking forward to The Painter's Apprentice and the new WIP sounds just as interesting.  This is a period in London's history I love to read more about

Every time I finish writing a novel I feel sad that I’m saying goodbye to the characters I have come to know and love (or hate!) so well over the previous year or so. When I finished The Apothecary’s Daughter I couldn’t bear to say goodbye to everyone so I wrote a sequel, The Painter’s Apprentice, and continued the story.

            But last month the manuscript of The Painter’s Apprentice was sent off to the publishers to be turned into a real book and I felt that same emptiness that I always experienced when one of my five children left home. So the only answer was to have a new baby. Not literally, of course, as my husband wouldn’t be at all amused, but each new novel is conceived in hope and expectation and nurtured into adulthood with love and a huge amount of hard work.

            I’d become fascinated by my findings as I researched the mid C17th and decided to keep within that time frame for at least one more novel. As a friend in my writing group, Word Watchers, said, it’s like walking down a street in the darkness and peering in through all the lighted windows. Each window tells a different story, even though all the houses are in the same street. Thank you, John, that lovely image has kept me nosily peeping into window after window until I found the story I wanted to write about.

            The Apothecary’s Daughter ended just after the Great Fire of London in 1666 and I began to wonder what it would have been like to live in or near the devastated city at that time. An estimated 13,000 houses had been destroyed and 100,000 people made homeless.

            How did the fire affect the ordinary man in the street? How did people manage for food and water after their homes were destroyed? Where did they go? Who carried out the rebuilding?  How could a love story grow out of the ashes, bringing new hope to my characters? So many questions!

Beginning a novel is like peering into the fog (or smoke in this case!) and catching glimpses of the characters, the settings and the story. The smoke is beginning to clear now and my hero and heroine are already real people in my mind. I’ve written the first 20,000 words of the manuscript,a ten page outline as a starting point and given it a working title of The House of Perfume.

Kate, my heroine, had an unhappy childhood and she yearns for a home and family of her own but, just as her dream is about to come true, the fire destroys her hopes.  My hero, Gabriel, is a blind perfumer and I’m relishing the opportunity of conveying to the reader all the wonderful scents as well as the horrible smells, which were such a part of C17th life. I also have a wonderful villain based on the property speculator people loved to hate at that time. Spectacularly named If-Jesus-Had-Not-Died-For-The-Thou-Had’st-Been Damn,d Barbon, he was known to his friends as Nicholas. And who can blame him for that!

My day job is interesting and absorbing but, nevertheless, part of my mind remains in the C17th as I’m busy at work. It’s interesting how ideas simmer away on the back-burner and then come to the fore as soon as I return home, full of enthusiasm to fire up the laptop and write.

It’s early days to know if The House of Perfume will be published but, whatever happens, I will finish writing the story, if only to find out how Kate and Gabriel solve all their difficulties.




Blog Tour: Character This or That List with Velvet {Giveaway!}



This post is part of THE FORGETTING CURVE Blog Tour. To view other posts, click here. Want the chance to win a hardcover copy of The Forgetting Curve and/or some really awesome swag? Read below to find out more!


Velvet's This or That


Cats or Dogs? Cats. Although she likes dogs—and her house is full of them—she’s more a cat person. Fiesty, independent, and particular.

Autumn or Spring? Autumn. It’s more suited to her wardrobe.

Movies or Music? Music. Velvet writes songs and promotes underground concerts.

Books or Computers? Books. She’s not that into technology.

Black & White or Colors? Black and white for her clothes, a touch of color for her hair.

Group or Solo? Group. She hangs with a group of friends, but she often feels alone.

Day or Night? Night. That’s when she promotes her secret concerts.

Reality or Virtual Reality? Reality. She has no interest in the virtual world.

Rain or Sunshine? Rain, but with an undercurrent of sunshine.

Half-Empty or Half-Full? She starts off half-empty, but grows toward half-full.



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Thursday, 3 May 2012

Guest author - Gilli Allan

Today, Gilli Allan joins me as guest author to share her thoughts on writing. 


Thank you for being guest author today, Gilli


Some thoughts on novel writing by Gilli Allan

Write a rainbow

When I write a book, the setting is almost as important to me as the characters.  Although I use a ‘type’ of landscape I am familiar with, I will always reinvent it.  I design hills and rivers, roads and settlements.  And when it is finished I can see it, as if it is a film. I know its different moods; what it looks like in winter, in summer, when the sun rises, and when the sun sets.

 Colour, atmosphere, texture are very important elements of the picture I have created.  I love that honey light you get sometimes, particularly in the autumn, as if viewing the scene through amber sunglasses.  I love the washed out colours of winter, those cool, pale greys, ice blues and sage greens.  And, when I come to inhabit my landscape with my cast of characters, I need to know the colour of their eyes, their complexions, their hair colour and the colours and styles of the clothes they wear, before I can even begin.

 But unless you are a literary writer, description has to be handled with caution - a little here and a little there. It is often said that ‘research’ should be like an iceberg.  You do it, you know it, but not a lot should show above the surface.  If you pile too much onto the reader, it becomes top-heavy and tedious.  I feel the same about description. You can trust the reader to fill in what they have not been told.

I recently read all the books in a series of UK based crime novels.  I am not going to mention the author, he is very successful and I wouldn’t have read the books one after another like that, if I hadn’t enjoyed them, but....  It’s not that I don’t want to have a mental image of the important characters in the novel I am reading, I do, but there’s description and description!  The author detailed the clothes of every individual - whether a significant player or a walk-on part.  And more than once. I wanted to tell him: ‘Enough! I don’t need to know this. Just give me a hint!’

The other way to use colour is to think of it as a metaphorical concept. Every book needs changes in pace, light and dark, ups and downs, passion and serenity, anger and indifference, loss and success. Unless you alter the mood, your story will be ‘all one note’ and will leave the reader bored or unsatisfied.  You could think of it almost like a symphony. The whole has to have a unity, but the lyrical passage has to be counterpointed against a dramatic movement, which is then counterpointed against a reprise or a rondo - the symphony coming, at last, to a satisfying crescendo.  

I am talking about everygenre here - after all, the interplay of human relationships can have plenty of ‘colour’, even without the added ingredients of adventure, murder, or an invasions by space aliens!  


Gilli Allan is celebrating the release of Life Class, this week.  



LIFE CLASS
A story about art, life, love and learning lessons

The class meets once a week to draw the human figure. For four of its members, life hasn’t lived up to expectations. All have failed to achieve what they thought they wanted in life. They gradually come to realise that it’s not just the naked model they need to study and understand. Their stories are very different, but they all have secrets they hide from the world and from themselves. By uncovering and coming to terms with the past, maybe they can move on to a different and unimagined future.

Dory says she works in the sex trade, the clean-up end. She deals with the damage sex can cause. Her job has given her a jaundiced view of men, an attitude confirmed by the disintegration of her own relationship. The time seems right to pursue what she really wants in life, ifshe can work out what that is. Love doesn’t figure in her view of the future – she’s always been a clear eyed realist – yet she finds herself chasing a dream.

Stefan is a single-minded loner, whose sole and overriding ambition is to make a living from his sculpture. So how the hell did he find himself facing a class of adults who want their old teacher back? Although love is an emotion he long ago closed off - it only leads to regret and shame - it creeps up on him from more than one direction. Is it time to admit that letting others into his life is not defeat?

Fran - Dory’s older sister - is a wife and a stay-at-home mother without enough to keep her occupied. On a collision course with her mid-life crisis, Fran craves the romance and excitement of her youth. An on-line flirtation with an old boyfriend becomes scarily obsessive, putting everything she really loves at risk. 

Dominic - has lived his life knowing all about sex but nothing about love. If he can only find his mother perhaps he can make sense of his past. But perhaps it is a doomed quest and it’s time to look to the future? By accepting the help and love that’s on offer here and now, he has a chance to transform his life.

Wednesday, 2 May 2012

Taking Charge - Mandy Baggot

Publication Day! Brand new contemporary romance from Mandy Baggot and Sapphire Star Publishing - Taking Charge launches today!  

All day today there will be the #TCparty on Twitter. Just use the hashtag to join in the fun!


  Happy Publication day, Mandy!


Taking Charge UK
Taking Charge USA


The lead in the novel has his own twitter page here @coleryan22 will be taking your questions on Weds 2nd May on Twitter in an Ask Cole feature between 5pm-6pm UK time. Be brave - ask him what he wears to bed!


Mandy is guest author here on 14th May as part of her blog tour.
This is where you can find the blog tour over the next two weeks



Thursday 3 May Louise Graham http://lougrahamiiblog.wordpress.com/
                            Nicky Wells Hall of Fame http://nickywellsklippert.wordpress.com/
                            Loveahappyending http://loveahappyending.com/
                            Rachel Lyndhursthttp://rachellyndhurst.blogspot.co.uk/

Friday 4 May     Sharon  http://jerasjamboree.wordpress.com/
Sat 5 May          Elle  (Trashionista)   http://trashionista.com/
Monday 7 May  Silvana http://books-are-my-life-silvy.blogspot.com/
Tuesday 8 May  Sue    http://lovereadinglovebooks.wordpress.com/
Wed 9 May       Ananda http://books-to-remember.blogspot.com/
Thurs 10 May    Lindsay  http://www.turningthepages.ca/
Friday 11 May   Rea  http://reabookreview.blogspot.com/
Mon 14 May     Carol  (Dizzy C's Little Book Blog) http://dizzycslittlebookblog.blogspot.co.uk/
Tues 15 May     Sarah  http://sbroadhurstreviews.blogspot.com/
                           Jessica (Peace Loves Books) http://readingwithstyle.blogspot.com
                           Angela  http://angelascavone.com/
Wed 16 May      Janice    http://www.janicehortonwriter.blogspot.com/
Thurs 17 May     Anjana  http://www.kindleandme.com/
                          
Friday 18 May    Chloe  (Chick Lit Chloe) http://www.chicklitchloe.blogspot.com/
                           Erin (Hook of a Book)   http://hookofabook.wordpress.com
Saturday 19 May Liv (Livvie's Outlook) http://livbet.webs.com/
                            Angela Scavone http://angelascavone.com/
Sunday 20 May   Kate http://memybooksandi.wordpress.com/
Monday 21 May Jessica (Peace Loves Books) http://readingwithstyle.blogspot.com
Tues 22 May      Kim (Kim the Bookworm) http://kimthebookworm.blogspot.co.uk/
Wed 23 May     (Hook of a Book) http://hookofabook.wordpress.com
Thurs24 May      Lindsay   http://thelittlereaderlibrary.blogspot.co.uk/
                           Black Hippie Chick http://blackhippiechick.wordpress.com/
Monday 28 May Mandy (Twimom101)   http://twimom101bookblog.blogspot.com
Tuesday 29 May Mandy (Twimom101)   http://twimom101bookblog.blogspot.com
Wed 30 May      Linn  http://linnbhalton.co.uk/my-guests/
                          Harlie’s Books http://harliebooks.blogspot.co.uk/
Wed 6 June        Chick Lit Central http://chicklitcentraltheblog.blogspot.co.uk/






Blog Notes

Hey, everyone! I'm sure you've noticed that I've been spending a considerable amount of time away from my blog lately. There's a few reasons for this that I'd like to tell you about, as well as some changes that's going to be going on around here in the near future.

First thing first. You see that little blob to the left of this? That's my baby! I'm currently 12 weeks pregnant and seriously over the moon. BUT, with this pregnancy comes with something I wasn't prepared for - crazy fatigue and nausea. I've literally been in my bed and on the couch more these past few weeks then all my life combined. It's to the point where simple things like household chores and just getting online is a challenge because it zaps what little energy I have in a matter of moments. Add to this the fact that Blogger hates me and has decided to start randomly deciding to not post a majority of my scheduled posts and... well, I think you see my dilemma. Up until now, there's really nothing I could do about it. But with the homestretch of the end of my first trimester in the midst and my health slowly (but surely) returning back to normal, I can happily say that this is about to change - very soon.

So, here are the changes I'm looking into....

More reviews. I have a ton of books that I have read and never reviewed on this blog. We're talking hundreds. Add to this my book-buying obsession has not waned much at all, and the result is a ton of books that could be reviewed for this blog. I'd like to post at least two or more reviews a day to try to catch up. Not only is this more exposure for the books (past, present and future), but this is a lot more substance for my blog - which is something I've wanted for a while.

Less requests. This one hurts my heart but, for right now, it's something that has to be done while I play a very extensive game of catch-up. I've decided the best way to deal with this is to cut out all requests except for published authors (this includes the publicists and publishers that work with said authors), authors I have already established a relationship with and, of course, Young Adult Books Central. I am too in love and believe in this site entirely too much to give it up. Everything else - the printed publications, the writing and self-published works - has been cut out. I don't like doing this, but my time is too limited to do as much as I was doing before.

To meme or not to meme? I still haven't decided on this, but I think the memes will more than likely be cut out on the blog. Right now, I'm playing around with the idea of highlighting the best part of the memes on my Facebook page instead - it's simpler and adds more content there.

Keeping the blog tours. I will still continue to set up a few blog tours and participate in tours as well, but it will be more selective and limited than before.

This list seriously gives me a headache and makes me want to scream, but it's something that has to be done. With these decisions, I'll be able to concentrate more on what I started this blog for - the book reviews - and less on outside distractions. This may change in the future but, for now, this is all I can figure out to keep me sane.

I've drafted many posts already that I'm going to manually post starting next week. By giving myself this week-long window, I am much more confident that I will be able to keep up with this ideal pace on the blog.

I thank you all for still following. As a matter of fact, I'm planning something special very soon to show you exactly how much I appreciate the loyalty.

XOXO

Tuesday, 1 May 2012

WIP Weds - Susan Buchanan


Susan Buchanan has joined me today to talk WIP. Welcome Susan...

Photo permission from author


Hi Carol

Thanks for the opportunity to talk about my new WIP, The Dating Game (working title).  I started writing this again in March 2012 after a gap of two years and eight months, when I was travelling a lot internationally for work and had no spare time to speak of.  I recently self-published my first novel, Sign of the Times, and following the warm response from readers, I was spurred on to start writing again. Since then I have set up my writer’s blog, originally for readers to follow the progress of this, my second novel, but it has fast become also a place for fellow writers to check in for tips and leave comments.

The idea for The Dating Game was inspired by a friend who had joined a dating agency and some of the escapades she relayed to me.  Although few of those will make it into my novel, the inspiration came from that initial chat.  I quickly saw how I could combine some humorous anecdotes with my love of crafting relationships between characters. It tickles me how something as random as a chat with a friend can be the springboard for an entire book.
The Dating Game is more in the genre of chick lit than my previous work, which is contemporary women’s fiction, but it still has its serious side.  I like to think of it as chick lit with less fluff.

I am now just over a quarter of the way through the first draft of The Dating Game and aim for it to be published on Amazon by the end of the year.  To ensure the novel is ready, my editor will be editing the earlier chapters whilst I write the remainder. I will need to do second drafts each week, so it’s a busy time!  I have a whiteboard behind my desk, where I write up scenes, ideas for characters and potential plot developments. I also have a box of ideas which I have collected over the years – seriously; it’s a huge box file which is overflowing!  I also like to know the characters inside out, even stuff that I might not use eventually in the novel, like their favourite actor, city or preferred pasta type.  The more I sketch the characters in my mind, the more they feel real to me and so I hope to the readers. I create a separate Word document for each character and update it daily with new things I learn about them or that they unveil to me.  It’s true to say I already miss the characters from Sign of the Times. I am sure the same will be true of The Dating Gamewhen I finish it.  Currently I am trying to do 1000 words per day, or to the end of a scene and that’s working so far.  I need to do at least this, as I am sure the editing will take up the last few months of the year. We had at least ten drafts before the final cut of Sign of the Times, but I think all that work made it a tighter novel.  

I love the writing phase, creating the characters, making unexpected changes in the plot, or taking the novel off in a different direction to that originally intended. Today for example, I decided that the novel would no longer only be told from Gill’s viewpoint. That’s a pretty significant change and will alter immensely the rest of the novel, as well as how the readers engage with it. 

The editing stage…well, I can’t say it’s my favourite task, particularly when I have to cut sections that I love, to comply with a publisher’s word count, but I enjoy it as I interact very well with my editor, who is an old friend from university. She tells me things like ‘No, you can’t call him that! Nobody called their son that back in the 70s’ and then backs it up with proof, showing me that it was the 1064th most popular boy’s name that year.  Or when I unwittingly called one of my characters after a minor celebrity – what do I know about cricket? I’ve learned my lesson this time around. I am very picky about grammar and punctuation, but she is even more particular!
It’s too early in the writing process to have a full blurb, and I currently have two endings, but to give you a few hints I would say the following about The Dating Game:
Workaholic recruitment consultant Gill McFadden is sick of her friends trying to match-make for her.  Up until now her love life has been a disaster and she’s going through a drier spell than the Sahara desert.  Seeing an ad on a bus one day, she decides to visit Happy Ever After dating agency.  Before long she is experiencing laughs, lust and… could it be love?  But like everything in Gill’s life, nothing is straightforward and she ends up wondering exactly who she can trust.

The Dating Game will be released in Dec 2012 and will be available as an e-book from Amazon.



Susan’s first book Sign of the Times is already available from Amazon, in e-book version - http://amzn.to/GKqZGd & http://amzn.to/IYN0Fc

You can visit Susan’s blog  www.susancbuchanan.blogspot.co.uk to follow the progress of 
The Dating Gameor for writer’s tips

Or follow her on Twitter @Susan_Buchanan

Winners - A Different Kind of Forever



Congratulations to the 5 winners, who each receive
 a Kindle version of this novel

Joan Hill

Sal Southard

Kate Verrier

BrendaVilder

Marion Abbott  
(Marion can you confirm your email by sending me an email as it bounced back)


DizzyC